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Where would you like to live after you graduate from university?Incheon or Soul?
I would like to live in Incheon after I graduate
First,since I have been living in Korea for two years and my temporary accommodation was just in Incheon.It means that I am more familiar with Incheon.
Second ,the price of renting house in Incheon is much lower than that in Seoul.Because I have no enough money to buy a flat,so I have to rent one instead . If live in incheon, I would not need to spend too much money.
Finally,the majority of university students are living in Incheon.If I live in Incheon , I can meet my mates easliy.On the other hand, we can help each other with both life and studies.
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