Dear XX, I went to Wenzhou for a concert(或者performance或者show 取决于你的演出的性质). It was a success!(或者说It was wonderful)
Have you got my pic?
I always make mistakes when speaking English, and I can hardly focus on those books.(或者说I don't get enough patience to read those books.)
By the way, I am afraid of my teachers!
This year is passing away. Happy new year!
Hello XX: I performed today, to Wenzhou, fairly successful! Issued a picture to see it? My English even more serious offenders, bought the book I do not use, another teacher, I am afraid Oh! New Year is coming and I have I wish you a Happy New Year!
(比较口语,希望可以接受)
Hey,XX,What's up. I've given a show today in Wenzhou,pretty awesome! Got the pic I sent before? Seems my English is getting worse, even didn't know how to deal with the books I just bought. Scared of the teachers as well. New year's approaching. Wish you a happy new year then!